Would agree this story was an epic fail?

Um...I thought it was alright. I can already see a few touching moments throughout the story, it wasn't retarded. Unless...you are simply too shy to bring up the fact that you were actually hoping for a positive response so you can finish the story. Well, you got one right here( It's just a guess, don't take it personally if you really meant to you know, emphasize the failure...)I've read a few books that is similar, about a boy and a girl both with problems of their own and how they overcame, or tried to overcame their issues. I would encourage " Lock and Keys"( Forgot the author's name, but she's really famous and had also written the book " This lullaby"). Good luck!